by Mia Cardine
rating 4 of 5 stars
status Read from March 22, 2014
review There are possibility here. I do need to have one freaking question answered. Is the hero's name Christian or Michael? This peed me off big time with in the very first sentence of meeting him. He was Christian and in the next Michael. Either name and Beth has her hands full. And this is only part one. What's left to come? I am looking forward to it.
There are minor grammar issues and there is a need for editing to be done.
I am not a professional reviewer. These are just my personal opinions.